IMHO :iono:
Some better padding / spacing. Some of the text is too hard up against the purple sash ... eg
http://www.idyllicevents.com.au/packages/packages.html
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I like the splash screen design.. but move on automatically after 3 seconds (preloading the nextpage) - shouldn't have to click to go to the main area.
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Your consultant will:
Receive and organise deliveries on wedding day. (the wedding day, your wedding day??)
Make sure that all finishing touches are complete for example ensuring correct placement of guest place cards, wedding favours, programs, menus.
Missing an "and" in that sentence.
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Where's the phone contact or a name .. weddings are supposed to be "personal" so emailing isn't - and ringing up and asking for "the wedding planner" (and not June or Mary etc) is also off putting for some people. Make them feel like a friend before you even start, by giving a bit of yourself first...
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What about customer testimonials? Previous events done - a track record.
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A consultant who will be in attendance for your entire wedding day to assist in the running of the day and help with any emergencies.
Try.
To assist in the running of the day and help with any emergencies, a consultant will be in attendance for your entire wedding day